Our Group Feedback

Our group pitched to the class today with the powerpoint previously posted on my blog. Below are parts that worked, didn't work and just suggestions that the class made. Each group had a sheet to write feedback on and we have collected it and wrote it below;

Parts the class thought were good/appropriate;
-Characters well planned
-2 easy locations
-Shows Lucy’s identity
-The changing room scene
-Song matches her characterises
-Clever idea about cloning machine
-80’s style for artist

Things they think we should develop or change;
-Confusing storyboard (Too simple)
-Think about the way you have used media language and link to Goodwin’s theory
-Need to find charity shop
-How are you doing the catwalk
-How would you film in the charity shop

Elements they think need more work on;
-Do you have permission for a charity shop
-How will the catwalk be shot and made

Audience Profile - Lucy Star

Audience Profile on Prezi

Madona

MADONA

$400.000.000

Influenced young women

1982 - sire records - "Everybody" Dir. Ed Steinberg - Budget $1500

image

boyish clothes and hair

baggy trousers

vampish make up

glamorous earrings

unpolished

1984 - sire records - " Like A Virgin" Dir. Mary Lambert

No. 1 for 6 weeks

scene set up

lion

Venice - Italy

canal = better image

fairytale like + special effects

dresses over leggins + necklaces

Blonde hair + More outfits

1989 - sire records - "Like A Prayer" Dir. Mary Lambert

deal with pepsi but got cancelled

catholic video - catholic symbols

burning crosses -contorversal

represented as an angel

sex appeal but innapropiate for church