Friday, 12 November 2010
feedback from pitch
The elements that work are;
Characters well planned
2 easy locations
Shows Lucy’s identity
The changing room sceneSong matches her characterises
Cleaver idea about cloning machine
80’s style for artist
Things that need developing are;
Confusing storyboard
Think about the way you have used media language and link to Goodwin’s theory
Need to find charity shop
How are you doing the catwalk
How would you film in the charity shop
Things that don’t work are;
Do you have permission for a charity shop
How will the catwalk be shot and made
Characters well planned
2 easy locations
Shows Lucy’s identity
The changing room sceneSong matches her characterises
Cleaver idea about cloning machine
80’s style for artist
Things that need developing are;
Confusing storyboard
Think about the way you have used media language and link to Goodwin’s theory
Need to find charity shop
How are you doing the catwalk
How would you film in the charity shop
Things that don’t work are;
Do you have permission for a charity shop
How will the catwalk be shot and made
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